Exposition
The story starts out with John Bignos and Moe Ho fighting behind the school. They are both seniors in high school and are fighting over a girl Laura Jane. John and Moe have been best friends since seventh grade and have been fighting over Laura since eighth grade. They live in a small town and the nearest town is twenty miles away. John is a average size person and is Jewish. Moe is a big person and has a love for latkes.
Inciting Incident
One day in school Laura was asked out by Michael Brome and she said yes. John and Moe both get extremely jealous and decide that they need to get rid of Michael. They start to plot, knowing that Laura and Michael are going to the school carnival next week together.
Rising Action
Throughout the week, John and Moe starts to talk to Michael to get to know him. At the day of the carnival John had already devised the plan without letting Moe know what it is. John has prepared to kill Michael with his Wu Shu. Moe without knowing John's plan, saw John kill Michael. John then threatens Moe that if he goes to the police that he will never see the light of day again.
Climax
The next day, no one has discovered the murder of Michael yet. John was paranoid that Moe would go to the police so he decides to make him latkes with a sprinkle of poison inside it. He offers it to Moe and within the next twenty-four hours, Moe was in his bed dead.
Falling Action
A week later, John was arrested for the murder of Michael. The police had found a bag of coins with his name on it. John was executed for the murder.
Resolution
I don't really think that there is a resolution. I will probably think of one when I am writing the actual story.
interesting story... except what happens to laura?
ReplyDeleteand where did john get poison to put in his latkes?
i like your resolution the most
best outline ever..the story will be even better
ReplyDeleteKevin,
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting revenge/fatal attraction narrative. I wonder about your tone. Will the story be funny at all? It is pretty extreme to kill someone, so I'm wondering if there is a bit of parody here?